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本帖最後由 3Meowshome 於 23-9-26 14:21 編輯
回覆 Koo4646 的帖子
我反而會去諗要點幫小朋友打番開思考先。
有部份官立學校會用 4 格圖,可能最尾一格係問號,再設字數上限。就算字數係比下限,因考試時間限制,計番小朋友手寫的Speed,都係等同有上限的。咁係等同限制小朋友加密同鑽深。你自己諗吓用60 字寫 4 個圖,可以寫得乜就會明。
呢幅我自己砌出來的,類似啦。
咁如我係一個小 4 小朋友,我可能會咁寫:
Pic 1:
In the morning, mom and I prepared some food. (9 words) I chopped some carrots. (4 words)
We put it in a picnic basket. (7 words)
(Total: 20 words)
Pic 2:
We went to the park to have a picnic. (9 words) It was a sunny afternoon. (5 words.)
We were very happy. ( 4 words)
(Total: 18 words)
Pic 3:
Suddenly, it started to rain. (5 words)
(Total: 5 words)
Pic 4:
We quickly packed up our stuff and hurried back to our car. (12 words) We were all soaking wet. (5 words) Our food was all soggy. (5 words)
(Total: 22 words)
4 幅圖加埋 已 65 字。
我換個角度,唔限字數,圖一我可比乜你:
It was Sunday morning and I got up unusually early because I knew that we were going on a picnic today. Once I was up, I got dressed and rushed into the kitchen to help mom prepare our food. Mom was slicing some bread there.
"Mom, anything I can help?" I asked as rushed over to tug at her apron. I was so excited that I could not even stand still.
"There are some carrots on the table. Can you chop them up for me, luv?" Mom said as she turned around and looked at me with a smile.
我未有耐寫完圖一,都 99 字了。我係大人同係老師,諗同打呢個 唔使 5 分鐘,但小朋友唔可能的。
所以要求故事多Events,有齊Story Mountain但限少字數/時間,等同要思考發展中的小朋友慣性唔好諗細緻些,唔好諗深D。
你想幫你小朋友應由打開Perspective開始。唔係諗英文淺定深。語言能力反映的往往唔係只係語言的能力,而係思考發展的精密度同深度。
我今日得閒寫得太多了,縮番先。向公海講太多不是我風格,得閒小小就出事。(笑加滴汗)
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